AL3K's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Memoir: Text Adventure]

Noees..!

^o)
Awesome idea.. cool music, great story...

I think I found a bug .... I won at blackjack and then the death appears? wTF?! thats not fair >:(
You didn't even told me someone would kill me to get the money if that's what it happened >_>

Cause of Death: stab wound... º_º ?

BlueFlameSkulls responds:

Death is random at some points.

Most likely your health was pretty damn low.

[Notepad Drawing Collab 2009]

goode...

Lots of imagination up there... gratz for being so cool guys

JKAmovies responds:

No Probs matey :3

[Sprite Sheet Tutorial -V2]

nice...

I made Link prepare to shoot an arrow..

Hey thanks! it's pretty cool...

Shawn responds:

Link getting ready to shoot, sounds pretty neat.

[Jak's Tutorial(1)]

..Well

This was a pretty good tutorial... specially because it was really good for a first flash-tutorial-submission..

I've learn something at least... cause, for example I didn't know how to draw hair that good.. and eyes were interesting too..
I noticed some things that maybe you didn't make because you didn't learn that yet on flash or whatever...

But it would be awesome if your next tutorial submission had:
-A preloader.
-A fordward and BACKward button :)
-Slow down the animation.. the onlyone you made was like too fast.. (when showing the face drawing)
-Also write on Author Comments, What's the tutorial about, or in the same title.
-And which style you're going to show 'how-to' draw.
-Just remember that details are important too. (for example: thick lines, scratchy/fast-made drawings don't help)

And on details, people also like to know stadistics of what you made and how much time it took you to make the video/tutorial.. etc..

Hey.. this was pretty f*good for a 13 yo guy, so keep on working on this kind of tutorial! there's people who don't know how to draw and don't understand those complicated tutorials that expert people make.. this was simple and easy to understand and it helped me a lot! seriously!
thanks man!

P.S. I'll be waiting next tutorials! I just hope they have body parts, clothes, and stuff like that ^_^ (just to give you some ideas..)

lazboi responds:

ok, thanx for all the pointers, I'm working on the 2nd one now.....

[3 Pointless Games]

lol

lol nice...

funny fast-car movements, and funny face ^^

AioriaRox responds:

Heh, thanks. :D

[BOom It!]

mhh

idk.. it was ok but it kinda needed something else to be a a good game..
other stuff beside mines, and a faster restart level button or something..

also the music that plays when you finish a level was kinda not for this game...

But graphics were perfect, details, and everything looking as simple as possible.. that was pretty good.

great work up there my friend :)
but everyone here noticed you can do much better :D

sandfire1on1 responds:

Thanks!

I agree, it DOES need more to be a GREAT game. I just figured I would release a new project that was nice and easy, because I haven't had the time lately to delve into a bigger project.

I appreciate the response though; yes I CAN do better! And, believe it or not, there ARE parts of this game that made me go "hmm... I oughta go fix this problem in my other projects." Every time I release a new title, I walk away with a little bit more in my repertoire.

Again, thanks, and hope to hear from you in the future!

[Egg Snatch]

oh Hey! :D

I liked it, it's really fun and entertaining.. well, at least for me it is..

Can't wait to try with a webcam..

Graphics were cool, details were cool, game was fun..
and.. originality with the webcam control and stuff like "Move left" or "Move right"
made it perfect.

Also sound couldn't see... cause it was 1:25 am and I had to go to work at 6, so I didn't want to get my family mad at me or something ^^ lol, but I promise I'll take a look at sound afterwards..

great funny, simple enjoyable cute game :D

ChromeShark responds:

Thanks a lot for your very nice review. I hope you get to try it out with sound and Webcam mode.

[Anarchistificationer]

..O... ...OMG

y'know.. I was gonna put 10.. but, you mentioned that band... @__@
damn..
have you ever listened to Incubus, Staind, Nirvana, or something like that?

lol, jk...

you made a funny impression in everyone of us who saw this game..
actually, I have to say, I played 2 times, because I really thought I could win the game... but ah, oh well!

NVM you know! because you like the jonas brothers @____@

...man..! EA MEAN Common! ... Man!

OH, I just noticed you're 15 yo, THAT'S WHY, PEOPLE

{{ ...I hope someone reads this.. :'( }}

Kyaztro responds:

It's called sarcasm, If you think the Jonas brothers are good, then you are most likely a 14 year old fangirl, however if you state the Jonas brothers suck expecting praise you are stupid, so I do neither.

[MadnessCreator[V3REMADE]]

...Ohh. .. I see

I think is the only AWESOME MCC ever..
Maybe if you'd make a game with someone else, you'd make the best character selection and styloes and stuff...

It's really good, but it would be awesome if you could just control and kill with the character you make..

:D I'm just saying, that could be.... (ALMOST) the great idea ever! :O

Steff responds:

I would do that but it's hard as fuck.
I need alot actionscripts and shit.