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[Sprite Sheet Tutorial -V2]

nice...

I made Link prepare to shoot an arrow..

Hey thanks! it's pretty cool...

Shawn responds:

Link getting ready to shoot, sounds pretty neat.

[Dadgame]

Wooowzzzzzz

it's perfect.. it looked like it wasn't going to be good.. but it finally was a perfect game.. each key you press counts and you get the necessary life, upgrades and enemies at the same time.. that's something that a lot of games don't have... and it makes them boring.. but thisone was perfect..

Also quality wasn't good even in high.. but anyways it fits the crazy style.. so that's another perfect worked detail..
music, effects, sounds, details, STOYLINE!, gameplay, game-function... everything was good, and the fact that a LOT of ppl like me was waiting for such an awesome game, and the Dad's at work's continue "chapter"

Keep doing more of this Dad's thing... it's Crazyness is just too koool!

[Armored Corps]

:( wow.. that's a grey ending..

pretty nice... but I found some bugs.. at the top side I used to get stuck, not sure why...
also sometimes it just moved alone..
and I have to admit, something was missing at the weapon upgrade mechanics...
like some shields ... or maybe it's just an error.. idk..
uh... but the idea as most of us think.. it's awesome.. and it's really entertaining, and addictive...

keep on making stuff like this.. but try to watch out for a little more details next time! :D 4/5

[This is the Only Level]

YES

Yes, yes I surely am (special)... -.-

[Turn Based Battle!]

fantastic!

Reality has been marked as it has never before on a game..
even if storyline was short and "boring"... it's much real than Zelda's storyline for example..

Great game.. I loved how you guys made it look real from it's storyline... and kinda funny... Also detailing was great... and camera's effects...
Gratz.. I was hoping my entire life to see a game that would end by just finding the boss as one of the first enemies... yes.. perfect...

you still needed some more work on it, but the idea was awesome

[Plumet]

hey :D

This is almost a perfect game!
it was simple and hard..
it had funny acceptable grahics..
I could be whatever I wanted.. Santa or a Ninja.. that was cool..
the resolutionwas kinda strange at first for me, but I was thinking maybe you could make it bigger and somehow add powerups, obstacles.. more characters..
character customization option...
and a few more things.. it would just be perfect if you added something else..
but still how it is right now, its awesome..

thanks for the game :D

[Jak's Tutorial(1)]

..Well

This was a pretty good tutorial... specially because it was really good for a first flash-tutorial-submission..

I've learn something at least... cause, for example I didn't know how to draw hair that good.. and eyes were interesting too..
I noticed some things that maybe you didn't make because you didn't learn that yet on flash or whatever...

But it would be awesome if your next tutorial submission had:
-A preloader.
-A fordward and BACKward button :)
-Slow down the animation.. the onlyone you made was like too fast.. (when showing the face drawing)
-Also write on Author Comments, What's the tutorial about, or in the same title.
-And which style you're going to show 'how-to' draw.
-Just remember that details are important too. (for example: thick lines, scratchy/fast-made drawings don't help)

And on details, people also like to know stadistics of what you made and how much time it took you to make the video/tutorial.. etc..

Hey.. this was pretty f*good for a 13 yo guy, so keep on working on this kind of tutorial! there's people who don't know how to draw and don't understand those complicated tutorials that expert people make.. this was simple and easy to understand and it helped me a lot! seriously!
thanks man!

P.S. I'll be waiting next tutorials! I just hope they have body parts, clothes, and stuff like that ^_^ (just to give you some ideas..)

lazboi responds:

ok, thanx for all the pointers, I'm working on the 2nd one now.....

[Seed of Destruction]

wows

you really had to work pretty hard on thisone, 5/5 ...6 if i could, and to favs..
also animation style, music, awesomeness, every lvl's ending... everything..
and most important: you really worked on details and the game is simple... that makes a game so cool.
just perfect.
gratz for the frontpage :)

[It's a Nice Day Today]

oh noes!

I don't know What To Do!
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p.d.
Hey really good work up there, im cheking your stuff right away !
Oh and really good work on How I Buy Petrol, lol I knew something about it..

awesome background paper style thing. And funny sun, and funny little stick animations ^_^
and fun game lulz.

Gratz for the frontpage!

[SHIFT 4]

Mh...

I have to admit I really actually don't like Shift, but I was just taking a look..
also i got a question..
Why the Dramatic music?
egyptian or whatever music...? I felt it didn't go with the game..
and even if it was pretty well done somethings was telling me that quality was missing somehow... idk, more control on jumps, they have this old-bad-looking style.. idk..

But the idea itself was pretty cool since Shift 1 was made, so congratulation guys you finished thisone and you just got to the frontpage :)

I can just say: try to add some quality presence on this important classic games for the internet! Details and Quality DOES matter!