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[Sketcher 3]

Ok.......

So.......Yeah, as qwertyuiopasdfgh said.........
The Design was pretty good... thing is, for example, the music could be themed on each level for it to fit better and motivate the gameplay.

.....uhm.. other thing.... is, there isn't really a gameplay... what are you aiming for exactly? a relaxing game? a time killer game...... or a game for children?
I'd put some of that info at least on the Author Comments to be considered on what we "the people" think.

If I'd know that, I could've helped more with the review...
But.. well.. again... the design was perfect. Gotta check what you're aiming for and what the gameplay feels like......

[Bunny Kill 5 The Game]

heys

I think it's very well done, I understand why so much missing here... I'd also love them to team up and make a cool game with this same idea you made.

Anyways.. I'm going to tell you what I would change.
-Put some other music and/or different themes.
-Pause option
-Toggle Quality option
-Nothing else... some bugs, as Keeth33 said. but most importantly what I wrote up there.

[Wheelbox: The Fallen Star]

Heyz... Some tips here

I'd do some changes..
Colors are very well chosen, but I'd try some "happy" colors instead.
I can notice those colors you chose make the game a little boring. and also makes the player want to go to sleep or something..

... When you JUMP, it kinda slows down... I'd check that out on the programming.

And.. well.. Sound could go with colors... Maybe a more action-like song. Or even a couple different themes too..

most important, the overall was pretty good... I kinda liked it besides those things... and I know it's a big thing to change.. but you can have this coment as a little help for the next game you make :D

[Mike Shadow I paid for it]

woahs

Great game, I love stick figures and even if this quite isn't really a stick figure game, it has the same style.
I'd do 3 critical changes on the game:
1- Sound and music should be able to mute separately because the music is just too damn repetitive for the kind of addictivness on the game.

2-There should be a saving option, in which I could later decide to create an acc on the Sponsor's website and then continue my game with my stuff... maybe give a code with the things unblocked or something like that..

3-The attacks shouls be able to Drag to different slots so I can organize them...

..I'll say the animations are AWESOMELY perfect, I'm gonna go watch for your work, but if you don't have any with this style, please start making some because its really fun (loved the give me the money lvl3 animation lol)

thanks and keep on making this pure detailed, awesome perfect hilariously original games :P :D

[Red Dragon Rampage]

uhm..................Sigh nononono this can't BE

It really would be a shame if you didn't fix this... bugs..

-For some reason, quality changes to low.
-Poop got stuck in front of the poop-table because I accidently dropped itm and it didn't dissappear/refresh.
-Something with the coins... for example, to me... they reappear when I choose to Continue.
-I had no clue I could move with A/D buttons, I just realized when I bought the wall. that would be awesome to be shown in the game besides the author's comments..
-Somehow, mixing all those bugs, it makes it really hard to play.
-Oh.. the worst was when I was going crazy and clicked outside the game's screen... lol... Maybe the guys run too fast.. you could either put More enemies and slow them up, or change to Arrow Moving controls.
-I hope this helps, and I also hope you fix these.. bastards >_> XXXXBUGXXXX

Everything else in-game was just amazing... I love playing with those amazing Gonzossm's drawings as graphics, and the music you choose always fit the game... so.. you just gotta chek'em all! check'em all!
buggse-mon! ----> (?)

[Sugar, sugar]

interesting...

Some People:
C'mon PEOPLE, you have to learn how to be PATIENT, you can't go around asking for "fast forward" just like that, that's the game about.. you have to be patient and eat that hour of falling sugar to see if you made a good work with lines... If there was an eraser tool and/or a fast forward, the game would be TOO easy and it wouldn't make sense playing it... you'd get the game finished in around 10 minutes.. it's almost like having God Mode on Age of Empires.. don't you think?
..lol ... well I somehow managed to master my drawing abilites with the mouse :P

Bontegames:
...I guess not everyone would understand the essence of the game.. it's well done.. and it's really hard... but I figured you can actually get passed every level that pops up.. So congrats to that and the frontpage :D
The game in general wasn't as fun as other I played here but it was really good

[*Flight*]

lol!!

Great game, pretty cool, very original and well made :D
I enjoyed it as much as Toss the Turtle (or whatever it was called)

..BTW, I saw the turtle there xD haha nice one

[No Time to Explain]

hahahahaha

Nice one, THAT's EXACTLY how Games should be made, unexpected storyline Rules

[CatGame]

wowz

Hilarious.. I must say it really is a Fantastic game!
..music... Q... effects... Tutorial was insane.. never seen a so-easy explained tut. in a game..
..Uhm.. I lost and pressed every F* key on my keyboard dammit.. I was like.. "holy SheaT! what's the key to continue!?" ..oh well..
nothing else to say except Who is the one who makes the voice there?
that was amazing dude.. you guys should make more games, no doubt

Oh.. yeahs... there could've been something else, some different mode of playing or something so you would get the player to do some other thing than shooting cats..

[Silent Hill: Room 304]

oh man..

It was really good untill I went to the forest and saw all those pictures...
Also, I'm not really someone who can tell you what to do with the game's title, but if it was me, I wouldn't write the whole entire game title... maybe a bit changed or something..

..I'm really sorry but that's just unoriginal.. you might want to think it over again before saying "All Rights go to" when for example, the images weren't really yours or konami's

I just didn't play the game because I found out that at least 50% of the work wasn't yours... so..
Maybe if you would have worked on your images... and on the game's title...